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Scene: Lightning strikes the tree and splits it. The man comes falling out of the tree. The man falls to the ground and is kneeling on the ground, coughing, as if using his lungs for the first time. The bark is falling off of his body, revealing olive toned skin.
Scene: Close up of his face, it is smooth and contains hints of a grain. His eyes seems to be searching and his nose is sniffing the air. His mouth is open and seems to be tasting the world.
Location: Further into Robinson Park
Scene: An old, derelict man is hiding from the rain. He has found a clearing in which a lean-to has been put together. He has a trashcan fire going and is just sitting. The derelict is wearing round rim glasses and a long coat. The floronic man bursts through the trees and bushes and just beats the living hell out of the derelict until he breathes no more. During this episode, the floronic man wears an expression during this time as if he is screaming but he makes no noise at all. The only sound is of flesh being broken and meat being torn.
Scene: The derelict is dead and the floronic man puts on the overcoat. Then he puts on the glasses. For some reason, the glasses now reflect a light, grayish-green color and are opaque for the rest of the comic.(There is no explanation for the change in the glasses color. I just wanted the floronic man to look this way. The clothes are just an acknowledgment of his once human history.)
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